Collective

Collective

A Poem by messydaisy

It is easier [for me]
To say it isn’t in the books for me to find
A savior to fit the finest form
Of all my varying needs.

It is easier [for me]
To see a tree and think of seeds
And sun and rain
And time
And not to think of a snap
Of two fingers
And a magical beginning.

It is easier [for me]
To fall asleep, asking myself
For strength I can’t seem to find inside
Than talking to an obscure illusion
That’s really only air.

It is easier [for me]
To doubt, to question, to search, to guess
To make believe I understand
The ways in which I’m never meant to understand
Than to sit back
And listen to words that do not belong to me.

© 2010 messydaisy


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wow, this is a wonderful write. I like the third stanza. It is how I feel at times. thanks for sharing!!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Fab poem. My favorite line was the last one :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


The poem is beautiful. The flow and the story was excellent. I like the concept of the poem. Need to learn by touching and tasting. Good wisdom in your words.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


WELL IT'S EASIER (FOR ME) TO KEEP READING YOUR THOUGHT PROVOKING AND AS YOU PUT IT - STRONG WORDS!
THIS IS A REAL GIFT THAT YOU HAVE AND YOU DEFINITELY HAVE STYLE AND THE WILL TO PULL IT OFF.
SIMPLY REMARKABLE I SAY!!!
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(poetry, literature, and dreams) and IT WOULD BE A HONOR IF YOU TOOK THE TIME TO COME OVER AND HAVE A LOOK.
I WOULD LIKE TO SEE YOUR NAME ON OUR MARQUEE - WHERE ARTISTIC FREEDOM IS ESSENTIAL .... I HOPE YOU DON'T MIND
IN MY WRITING I RHYME BUT I CAN GET AWAY WITH IT BECAUSE I'M PRETTY DAMN GOOD!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 18, 2010
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messydaisy
messydaisy

Akron, OH



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I like words and putting them together to make pretty sentences. I think music is the best use of poetry and if I had any talent I wouldn't be in college, but I'd be making music for the masses. Or, j.. more..

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