Some Kind of Decoy

Some Kind of Decoy

A Poem by messydaisy

Do you know what you do?
I think you may,
I wish you'd see
The hurricane inside.
Do you know what lies
In the space between
My smile and my heart.
I wish you'd know
Just how I seem to tremble
At the storm you've brought my way.
I swear, if you could just look -just once-
I may be able to survive.

© 2010 messydaisy


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This one really pulls out that feeling I have with walls in social situations, especially if there is a romantic interest involved. "I want the attention but I don't want you to know that I want it." I could be totally wrong about your motive, but that's what I got out of it. Great piece, good sir.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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messydaisy
messydaisy

Akron, OH



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I like words and putting them together to make pretty sentences. I think music is the best use of poetry and if I had any talent I wouldn't be in college, but I'd be making music for the masses. Or, j.. more..

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