Caught in the spider’s web

In my country, spider is symbolically use to represent someone who uses cunning and witty ways to get what they want from people. This is about how someone got caught up in the same situation. Enjoy

He sees me and could see an angel.
With me, he would walk a thousand miles.
Breaking through walls
And going through storms
Through my eyes, he could see the Milky Way.
My heart melt and I had no say.
He got into my head that I could not stay
A day without him felt like the world was at its end.
Little did I know, all was part of his vain ways
Bowing to him and doing his wishes.
He went away and left no sign
I felt the pain but all I could do is sigh.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, that spider can be so enticing...put on a mask of a lamb...and then we fly right into the trap...and that web can be so painful...as the heart slowly breaks.
I really like this poem...i have one suggestion. I would leave out the description and just let the readers see what they see and relate in their own way.
but a really strong, image filled poem.
j.

[Mercsa]

Thank you for appreciating my work.