Longing

Longing

A Poem by merelyme
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One view on the horror of domestic violence.

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I watch the waves that are viciously falling
in rhythm upon the weary, time-scarred shore,
marveling at the way it accepts the beating
without thought to the bitter promise of more.

I know that nature never fails to follow
the stone-carved pattern constructed in the past;
the sky, the earth, the sea deep and shallow:
all victims to the laws that endure and last.

I cannot – though trying – numb my aching nerves
to cope with the feeling like the tired sand
in the struggle to accept ev’ry blow he serves,
each time showering my flesh with colored bands.

I dream of the peace known to beaches far and wide,
their lack of objection at the come of the tide.

 

© 2009 merelyme


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Wow. Deep and meaningful writing here. I was totally engulfed by these lines. You have a very real and amazing talent. More!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


The whole piece was great, but those last two lines sum up the feeling the best. The wanting of those lines are priceless. Kudos.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is an amazing piece with a difficult subject. Very well done, and the imagery was quite beautiful. Thank you for sharing this intense piece.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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