comrade

you rode off and never paused to say a thing to me ,i never came to grips
if there's one thing out here you'll remember it's  how to forget
so i will just keep circling the drain while you circle the wagons
and i will just sit here and pretend that nothing is gonna call your soul again

hit the door one last time
double over with a cry 
cut me short when i say the things that no one else will say
you fled yes you did, you couldn't keep a lid on things
we wont have to wait and see what tomorrow brings

all you're gonna end up with is old loneliness in your last hour
that's the way its suppose to be i guess
far out on the frontier, wild and reckless 

so you go and tell em all your comrade's fate
(too late to save)
seems there was a problem taking the pain
be he never had a problem with his aim

I've seen so many things that i can't say

i just wanted you to know that i'm ok

i'm ok enough

i'm ok, enough

ok

Reviews

[Kesha]

"When I say the things no one else will say" I love that line in particular, because it's how i live my life, honesty us the best policy, & this piece tells the brutal truth of it all. Nicely done!

[mercy party]

Hey Thanks! a like your honesty. glad you checked this!

[mercy party]

i not a . : )

[Kesha]

You're welcome

[BBP]

Love the old western twist on this one. Nice write Mercy.

[mercy party]

thank B. Thanks for looking out.

[BBP]

Anytime MP!

[Michael S]

This speaks a lot and has lot of depth in it, mercy party. Filled with some amazing words, you preached a beautiful lesson on comrade..fate of loneliness can be a pain for some people but some does it for their aim. Loved the first two verses a lot. Thanks for sharing this work. Well done.

[mercy party]

hey thank you so much! glad you grasp it in that way. thanks for your time.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Awesome poem..very beautiful and interesting..thank you for sharing mercy

[mercy party]

i always appreciate you reading my stuff. Thanks!

[Harley Quinn]

Great writing! I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.

[mercy party]

thank you for that , glad you enjoyed!

[wordman]

sounds like you`re coming to the true feelings that you really feel

[mercy party]

ever-changing, i guess. hey thanks man!

[Farmgirl]

Ohhhhhh snaaaaaap!


I'm nailing this one to the board!!

Going to be shelved my Library !!!


I Looooove it!!


hit the door one last time
double over with a cry
cut me short when i say the things that no one else will say
you fled yes you did, you couldn't keep a lid on things
we wont have to wait and see what tomorrow brings



#Epic #Imagery


Happy reader

[mercy party]

farmgirl, you rock! thank you so much, so happy for your review!

[Farmgirl]

No you do ! I just read you rocking it with your writing ..

You are quite talented too!

There are so many talented writers here ...


Never a dull moment here's at WC
That's for certain!

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