Tower of London

#10

i quit drinking at 21

early did i have my fun 

and my love she was no longer mine

in the last few days of 39. 

now i'm in the Tower of London locked up and wondering

what i did and what i didn't, i'd do it all again

many questions concerning the circumstances of your disappearance

so i will go

and there's nothing to contradict.

and you will know what a secondary feeling is

when the widow understands the things you did

he was a good man

the blood is on your hands 

you could of left but you insisted

not a chance

and you were right you're not going anywhere

you'll be stuck to matching chairs

things were good and you'll wanna think that they weren't

but you'll remember when her toast is burnt

and you will know what a secondary feeling is

when the widow understands the things you did

he was a good man

the blood is on your hands 

you could of left but you insisted

not a chance

Reviews

[...]

nice mixations of funny side and dark side of love. streaming rhymes and it s joy to read.

[mercy party]

thanks, i'm glad you saw the humor in it. I'm hoping to look back and laugh someday.

[...]

humour is at all things . but things are not sometimes funny. yes someday for sure. i hope at least you are okay

[mercy party]

i am, i assure. much to look forward to. thanks for that!

[...]

one day all will clear out. time dont heal but new experience they can

[Pete]

creative title. draws you in and holds through to the end. relates a sad tale. repetition of "the blood is on your hands
you could of left but you insisted
not a chance" is effective. good job.

[mercy party]

hey thank you! i sure do appreciate your time.

[Pete]

very welcome.