if darkness is all we've ever known is it wrong? or right?

if darkness is all we've ever known is it wrong? or right?

A Story by mercy.just.breathe

its taken time to realize that inflicting pain on ones-self and inflicting pain on another is different. 
his sweet and calming words turn to bitter fire in a spilt of a second and before you know it your inhaling the ashes from the fire in which you were held up too. it wasn't always this way. from a pinky promise to a broken vow because one pinky can not hold up the weight of a world. one pinky can not hold up the love in which you hold. but were you wrong for loving a man who lays hands on not only your heart and your mind. but breaks your bones, and bruises your soul. is it wrong for a woman to fall in love with darkness? for if darkness is all she's have ever known whats right? because to a woman who has fallen in love with darkness who captivates her, slowly eats her away piece by piece  is it wrong? whats right in this world is the only thing we have not yet to find. a void in which darkness hides and light isn't bright enough to shatter the clouds. an elevation of love and hate. A piece that not only fills, but destroys. a momentarily silence but for those who have been broken they SCREAM. where silence is empty for some but full of voices in a valley that echo..and echo..and they never end. is it wrong for a child. a growing source learning an growing off the words and the chaos of this world. is it wrong for that child at 2am screaming for help. because when darkness comes in and takes his hands, violent actions and silver pens, is it wrong for him to draw the lines that his mind has become. is it wrong for that child to destroy what destroys himself.  is it wrong for the moon to gravitate our world where tides have no choice but to "follow"..   
if darkness is all we've ever known is it wrong?

© 2015 mercy.just.breathe


Author's Note

mercy.just.breathe
ignore grammer and punctuation thanks.

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You put a lot into the story. I believe could add the old logic of description. Who, what, where, how and when to every situations. The story had great possibilities. I wanted to know and read more. The tale of living with and fighting darkness are always a interesting journey. Thank you for sharing the story.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You put a lot into the story. I believe could add the old logic of description. Who, what, where, how and when to every situations. The story had great possibilities. I wanted to know and read more. The tale of living with and fighting darkness are always a interesting journey. Thank you for sharing the story.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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mercy.just.breathe

hilton head, SC



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my name is mercy. I'm a musician and a singer/songwriter. welcome to my mind, my thoughts, the scars on my heart and the scars on my skin. you may go or stay as you please. ill be here writing with ev.. more..

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