empty.

The meaning? Hidden in plain sight

The need to feel empty,

is consuming.

It eats away at your soul.

You cringe

and shake

and wait,

For the perfect moment to feel well again.

Alone in dungeon

where it all takes place.

It's where you begin to feel empty

second after second,

time after time.

 

Even when it's all over,

that damned mirror still lies.

Or is it telling the truth?

No matter how empty that body of yours is

will you ever see beauty?

Author's Note

sorry if it's awful

Reviews

[Braden Aric]

Man, this is really great. Thoroughly terrific.

[zainul]

It really sounds interesting.
I love the idea of emptiness.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

It sounds like the character in the poem lacks motivation for daily things, something like that, maybe?