wow i just hit somebody with my car

just got this in my head. gotta get it out!

wow i just hit somenbody with my car. Thump Thump was the sound it made. i really hope this guys ok. but i think im just gonna keep driving anyway.

when i hit him i heard a huge grunt. it kinda made me laugh, in a sick way. but you know what? there is nothing funny about running people over. Just kidding!

Ahahaha i hit him. i better drive fast the cops are on to me.

Author's Note

hahaha like i said. gotta get it out!

Reviews

[LeeLee Ryder]

Hit hit bang bang... I stabbed someone, ran away and I've been on the CUTTING edge ever since....
Just kidding ... NOT REALLY... Actually, I got hit once and I grunted as I fell unconscious ...
luckily I could walk after a few months of hovering over my feet ... I looked like a grannie... HeeHee..
All kidding aside .. wicked thoughts are fun tools to write with... YOU'VE INSPIRED ME to write
about the above IMAGINARY stabbing.
Thanks for sharing... Fun stuff ....
Lee (hit-tee) Lee

[Saturn's Lover]

Made me laugh. It's messed up, but so funny. Love the whole attitude of it.

[Nicole]

Lol. I love your writing..hahaha.
I'm cracking up right now, and my teacher's like..
"Are you okay?"

[Brittney]

Abby that was hilarious!

[Kayla]

The beginning was surprisingly funny. Poetry comes from unexpected places, but I believe that when you write something sick, go all the way sick. Maybe a poem about a person that has the urge to compulisvely run people over? That would be different. I think you need to lose the line "running people over isn't fun, Just Kidding!" Its confusing. However, thank you for the fresh, interesting poem
Awena

[Alphachad]

This poem is sick. I don't know why i like it. I even read it twice XD

[Blake<3]

haha wow.abs,this is great!:D

[Courtney Elizabeth]

lmao wow abby ur amazing. tht poem is hi-laroi-ous!!!! teheehheh love ya!