The composition is brilliant! An unparalleled mastery of vowels, and none of those horrible things called adjectives and adverbs. I do believe this is the perfect poem. Bravo!
The dimensions within this piece are striking. Your use of diction has been duly noted and recognized for what it is, art. Amazing. I detect a bit of Frost and Twain especially in the first few lines. Keep up the good work. :D
I always prefer to stroke a p***y with my hand to get a purr out of it. Someone should feed this kitty.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
ew
11 Years Ago
Gross
11 Years Ago
WHAT? You never pet your kittens? HOW CRUEL! Someone should turn you in to PETA! And feed the meowin.. read moreWHAT? You never pet your kittens? HOW CRUEL! Someone should turn you in to PETA! And feed the meowing kitty for Pete's sake!
11 Years Ago
you're disgusting.
11 Years Ago
You're without imagination...and frankly...I'd rather be disgusting than without imagination. (laug.. read moreYou're without imagination...and frankly...I'd rather be disgusting than without imagination. (laughing at you)...