becoming a man

becoming a man

A Poem by Superfluous Thinking
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i have always loved writing, but when someone left me in shambles, well, thats the first time i have ever actually written a poem, and now i cant stop

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BECOMING A MAN
I hid behind,
These divine lies,
Behind these dark skies,
Laid in this childs eyes,
Because this boy was not ready to become a man,
I was filled with sighs,
Sometimes cries,
For the break in these ties,
My anxiety flies,
Because who I am, I will never understand,
But a man I became,
I hold no shame,
Ive relit the flame,
Never to be the same,
I wear my manhood like a brand,
Im now firm like stone,
Not afraid to be alone,
Im drenched to the bone,
By sweat from work of my own,
This man needs no crutch to stand

© 2012 Superfluous Thinking


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Superfluous Thinking
my first poem

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Superfluous Thinking
Superfluous Thinking

Watertown, SD



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I am but a simple man, who holds a simple plan. I am the kind of man whose thinking can be a bit superfluous. i am a man who just tries every day to be a good man, an honest man, a simple man. i ma.. more..

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