Today

Today

A Poem by Natalie

And today the world cries.

Today the world sings,

Are we the only ones who can hear

Anything?

No.

It’s not the noise, falling

Hard and fast

Are we the only ones who can hear

Pain suffering?

 

So today the world cries.

Today the world sings,

Today I know you’re walking

Far away…from leaving me

 

© 2010 Natalie


Author's Note

Natalie
If you review this poem I have one question I would like you to answer. Is it just me or do almost all my poems sound very much alike? Just let me know thanks! :D

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This is very good. And I don't think all of your poems sound alike. Everyone's poems sound somewhat similar though because each person has a specific writing style.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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oh that is deep, liked your phrasing and especially the last stanza..well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Ima
Oh my !! its really powerful... i really like it..
and as for answering you i dont think you sound alike =/ i mean you convey a different meaning everytime =/

Posted 14 Years Ago


A few but powerful words just as it should be.
You ask if your poems sound alike. I don't think they sound alike, as each has touched me differently. You have your own unique and wonderful style. I like the gentle power of your words. Keep writing, you have something important to say that others want to hear. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i kind of liked this..
especially the last stanza..
good job..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aw! That's beautiful! Very unique and beautiful! Nice job! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice-the never ending inquiry
into humankind's questionable
altruism in this world-asked
so well in this true to the world
piece of "Magnificent Poetry..."

I Love This Final Verse...

"So today the world cries.
Today the world sings,
Today I know you’re walking
Far away…from leaving me"

james:-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


We may hear the sad cries more then when the world sings. Easy to recognize the pain and hurt in this world. I like the flow and the questions. Complete poem was strong. A skill writer can write a complete poem in so few words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 28, 2010
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Natalie
Natalie

orlando, FL



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