You and I

I am the day and you are the night

I am the sun and you are the moon

I am the clouds and you are the stars

For you adored I and I adored you.

I am the wake and you are the sleep

I am the fantasy and you are the dream

I am the white and you are the black 

For I adored you and you adored I.

Author's Note

This is in the perspective of someone else. Not me.

Reviews

[SilentDreamer]

I like how the ending wraps it all up and ends it perfectly closing it out to just finish it like a perfect sunset ends a day. It was very creative, and had good flow. Great job.

[Pikachu]

wow this is a great write reminds me of a song

[J.S. Pua]

yes..
a good lyrical piece..
nice work..

[Ima]

awesome concept ... it seems simple yet divine in its message...
loved it
Fatima

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God--How sweet--very lyrical!!
I love this--poem/song-Very Kool!!!

james:-)