Rain In the Day

Raindrops fall from the sun.

And pure white clouds that
make way for her song.

I used to think that rain are
tears that pour from lost souls,
A choir of misery's symphony.
But this rain, are the
tears of her joy and praise
that shower the earth
and gleams in the water.

An angel's voice.

That penetrates through my window
Reflecting off my skin
Her tears are the purity of yellow
and orange that softens the air,

And the earth stands still. 

Author's Note

I looked out the window a moment ago. Saw a light shower of rain. Yet it was bright and sunny. I've seen days like this where the rain falls while the sun shines but for some reason, this time I saw more than that. It was the way the rain fell and sound it made. The way the ripples formed when the water hit the surface of the pool water. I had to write it down.

Reviews

[Abdul Aziz]

I know what you're talking about. I've been thinking of writing such a poem too. But you've captured the feeling better than I ever could. Very good imagery and metaphors. Very soothing. Great job!

[Natalie]

I completely agree. I love the rain. Rain is one of the most beautiful things is the world. That and the moon and I've learned to see rain both ways. The world's misery and the world's beauty, showering down on us. It's amazing. Anyway thank you very much Brian. I'm glad you got what where I was coming from.

[Pikachu]

rain is the most amazing thing on this planet it is as if the world is crying and we see its pain the way you wrote it in such a passion is amazing

[Natalie]

Thank you so much :)

[J.S. Pua]

"I used to think that rain are
tears that pour from lost souls,
A choir of misery's symphony."

good work.