Your Mind is Invisble

Your Mind is Invisble

A Poem by Natalie

And all your mind has a story

For no one to read

Cause all your pages are invisible

To no one but me

Exposed is your mind

That no one can read

Cause all your pages are invisible

To no one but me

© 2010 Natalie


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Thank you so much! Glad you liked it. :D Your reviews always make my day!

Posted 14 Years Ago


WoW--I'll just quote the whole friggin poem-
Jeeeeeeez---I love the structure and theme of this...

"Cause all your pages are invisible
To no one but me"
{and this}
"Exposed is your mind
That no one can read"

{Mood repetition--that's difficult to do-but you mastered it}

No Kidding--a grand damn poem--I Love It:-)

james:-)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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