Paper and INK

QUICKIE

^{In this the old ways can never shine}

^{they may linger}

^{wait a little while}

 

^{But sooner than one person can blink}

^{It’s gone}

                     ^{and all that’s left is the paper and ink}

Reviews

[Brenda Keach Bradley]

short but good in these few lines u have told a story. U always write with inner depth, yes i know u always say u dont but it is there in your writing. but in these few short lines u have written how things change like a blink of a eye which is true. as always your words make us think my friend.

[linear]

Thx Brenda, you're a sweetheart.......if there is any depth to my writing It's not from me, :O)

[Brenda Keach Bradley]

oh see i knew u would say that smh u always do u just fefuse to see your talent old man lol but its there n u my dear friend know it so just acceot the priase u deserve it

[Brenda Keach Bradley]

*refuse dang it

[Wiccangoddessmom]

You better Listen to Brenda, she speaks the truth, I'm still knew to the hole poem thing but I even loved it :)

[frivolous treasures]

Amazingly short, but beautifully deep and long with meaning. Oh, how treasured things flit by so fast and all we are left is a sadness that we had taken it for granted. I also love the last line, as paper and ink is a poet's best friend...
Lovely job, once again.

[Circe]

how quickly things can vanish, how people change, can you ever know someone fully? they may wait a little while... yes it's all a ticking bomb. really appreciate the sentiments.

[Corset]

Choose the path, then lead on.

[linear]

thank you