Love and Sex

Love and Sex

A Poem by Michel'le

The problem with relationships now is that people associate love with sex
They use the "if you love me you will do it" line
 If you are one of these people then don't get in a relationship
 In a relationship two people should build each other not use each other only for sexual pleasure.  

© 2014 Michel'le


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very true thoughts, I agree a hundred percent. You probably could write a really good poem with this, using a bunch of figurative language and stuff. I would play around with this idea if i was you, I bet there's a story hidden in there somewhere! good luck getting it out.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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very true thoughts, I agree a hundred percent. You probably could write a really good poem with this, using a bunch of figurative language and stuff. I would play around with this idea if i was you, I bet there's a story hidden in there somewhere! good luck getting it out.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

True words. However, this is more like a blog or a very short essay than a poem. I also think you might expound upon the themes more.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 10, 2014
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Tags: love, sex, relationship, generation