ONLY?

ONLY?

A Poem by Mello

Open your eyes
To see which is which
Your heart to understand
You can get lost in a temporary light if u add a little bleach
Trust up in intuition
Only then consciousness is reached
Only when foolishness is ditched
Only when self knowledge is hitched
Only when self talk is pitched
Only when travels to the past is pinched
Maybe time will approach to have the mind freed
Brush off the greed
Opinions presented
Not accepted but acknowledged
Many more messaged
Not enough helped

© 2015 Mello


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You did well on this poem. I like the choice of words! #kudos

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Mello
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moorhead, MN



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