A Place I Go

There's a place I go

A place where only I am welcome

There's a place I go

Where I find out what to become

There's a place I go

A place where I can be free

There's a place I go

Where I can be me

There's a place I go

A place where I am the boss

There's a place I go

Where I have no loose

There's a place I go

A place way beyond distance

There's a place I go

Where I have no resistance

There's a place I go

A place from the world to my bead

There's a place I go

And that place is my head

Author's Note

If you are looking to read some amazing and original poetry that you can relate to, go check out yeahthatsme on www.teenink.com

Reviews

[Trigorin]

You have a good concept, but I think the piece is just slightly too long for all the repetition you have here. I'd consider keeping that motif for just the first and last stanzas and branching out a little more in the middle ones.