Far from the end

This is a poem about how teenagers, especially intelligent teenagers, often find they aren't taken seriously... Well, I do.

I'm in the place the eye does not see

I'm in the middle of the middle

but far from the end

old enough to know better

but too young to know why

for some I must be an adult

but for most I'm still a child.

So I must show respect and

make my own

opinions

but my voice is not heard

no matter how loud I speak

how much sense

wisdom

or kindness

their ears do not care for my words.

No matter what they be.

I'm in the place ages eye does not see

I'm in the middle of the middle

but far from the end.

Author's Note

Made this up in I.C.T don't expect it to be good.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I'm in the place ages eye does not see.
A nice write.

[Caramel]

Thank you xx

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Suditi]

A nice write!
And very easy to connect to!
Throughout the poem, you keep thinking, "Yeahh been there, done that"
Great work. :)

[mark slade]

Nothing wrong with this poem. I like unusual pattern it sets. reminds me of beatnik poetry, a little.