The Eve soon forgotten - Part 2A Chapter by Caramel“Be
gone from this place fey woman, I’ve had enough of your kind today.” Turning,
Blur saw the most beautiful Echo she had ever seen. It was quite clearly Lady
Cwenhild Bunlock so Blur tried a curtsy. However, the change had taken too much
energy and her vision when funny; she stumbled, having to steady herself on the
bedside table, cringing slightly as the dust worked its way into her finger’s
crevices. Lady
Bunlock obviously caught on to Blur’s discomfort because she said, “After a
lifetime of cleaning I thought I might cut myself some slack with the house
work after death. In addition, it adds to the terror, it helps me scare away
the innocent. That’s all I can really do to protect them.” She spoke as though
she was stuck in two centuries, which Blur supposed she was. Blur
wasn’t really sure how to react to the Lady’s sudden chattiness; maybe it was
just loneliness. “I don’t know. A creepy old house on the outside, dismal and
bleak, falling apart and over grown. Inside, sparkly and new, gleaming like
someone was still there, making sure it didn’t go to ruin.” She gave a small
smile, which Cwenhild returned. Cwenhild
waved her translucent hand and the dust on the bed dispersed rapidly, leaving a
spotless patch plenty big enough for Blur’s scrawny bum, “I think you should
rest first, I think I can tolerate your presence for a little while longer,”
the sentence was said in jest so Blur sat and regained some strength. “Am I
right in thinking your transformation is at fault for your discomfort?” “Yes,
but it always fades after a short time,” Blur answered, it was like they were
old friends. “And
in the long term?” “Well,
I’m not all that strong physically, you can’t be when you change form as much
as me,” said Blur. She wasn’t entirely sure what Cwenhild was asking so she improvised,
“I bruise and my bones can break a lot easier than most beings and I have to
sleep a lot more, but apart from that I’m pretty much like any other person in
the world.” Answering the question was not made any easier by Cwenhild standing
in her dressing table; the wood surface seemed to be chopping her in half. “What
about you? It can’t be great living forever as an Echo.” Bad Blur! Why do you
have to ask stupid questions? This is going to make her sad, possibly angry. Luckily
for Blur, it was the former. “It
isn’t much of a life.” Her voice was so mellow and heartbreaking, Blur felt her
eyes start to prickle. Time
passed, only their breath broke the silence. Finally, the morning tinges of red
peeped over the horizon and Cwenhild spoke, “You should get going if you wish
to remain unknown.” Blur
nodded, sleep called to her but she knew there was much more to come before her
head could rest. She was going to be so
grumpy by the end of this. Well, the quicker she gets this done, the faster
she’ll get to bed. As
she left through the hole in the fence, carrying Daniel in her skinny arms, she
felt the urge to turn around, there standing before her was Cwenhild, her dust
figure glinting slightly in the growing light, “I never meant to harm those
children. You know, the fey children. I didn’t know back then that most
changelings were as innocent as the switched humans. I wasn’t aware of the politics,” she spat the word with disgust
and contempt, “of the situation. Perhaps my punishment isn’t so unjust, I’ll
have forever to reflect on what I’ve done.” “Ignorance
is not a crime,” Blur said, shaking her head, Cwenhild had obviously spent time
mulling over on that thought. “Anyway, I think you’ve punished yourself
enough.” “Maybe
you’d think differently if it was you I was burning with iron, hours on end.
Pain makes anger clearer to people.” Not
entirely sure, as always, what Cwenhild meant, Blur turned and walked into the
town. Time
to be forgotten. © 2012 Caramel |
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Added on December 20, 2011 Last Updated on January 16, 2012 AuthorCaramelPortsmouth, United KingdomAboutReally? Do I have to talk about myself? I tend to ramble a lot... Well... To sum me up in two words: Lazy perfectionist. It's complicated, I know. I haven't always loved writing, I used to hate it, .. more..Writing
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