You

It's a story about you, and about being "you"

He's the type of a man that you would love to have him around, if you're lucky to have his heart, you should take a good care of it, he seems like a strong person, while actually he's pretty soft inside, he will give you his time just bcs you're worth it, he will call you just to hear your story and what are u doing today till you both fell asleep, He's a hard worker and ambitious person, he's quite busy with his work but he will spare some times just to make sure you're not lonely, he's not the type of a romantic guy, dont expect a bouquet of flowers or even teddy bear from him cause he wont please you with those, but he will make you happy in his own way by making stupid jokes, always be there whenever you need him, and leading you to be a better person which not everyone could do that. 

He will tell you story about his relationship with his mom, he loves his mom so much that you will always hear about her from him, he will tell good things about you to his mom. He doesnt have a car, but he will put so much effort just to visit you and take you to the mall, he doesnt care about how expensive the taxi just to get to your place, as long as he can make you happy. He will make sure that your first date with him is going to be special, and also, he will ask permission directly to your mom to ask you out. He's not romantic, but he wants to make sure you to experienced things you nvr done before, or eat any food you nvr try, he will always be the first to make sure you try it, with him.

He can be a little bit harsh sometimes, and if you both fight, he's actually more dying than you will ever be, he thinks alot you can say he over thinks alot, about so much things, he cant sleep before 1 a.m and always waking up with a panic attack, he's having stressful day almost everyday, so you need to calm him down and make him happy and to forget about bad things. He distract his stressful mind by playing dota2, so just let him play and dont forbid him to stop, play along with him instead. He will tell all his friends about you, about how he met you, about how pretty you are, about how he love you so much that he will laugh and smile just by saying your name. Note this, he really really loves to see you in a straight bangs, he loves it so much.

He will always hug you whenever you both walking together, he will randomly kick you at the back of your feet just to see you fall, and yes you wont really fall cause he put his arm around you, and you both will laugh about it, he lovessss to ask "can i carry you? Please?", yes in the middle of the mall. You should never say yes cause he will do it for real. You will meet him from the time the mall is starting to open until late night and the mall is closed, yes, he will give you that much time. If you're lucky to have his mom likes you, he will bring you to the island with his mom just to make you happy and for you to be more close with his mom. 

He wanted to have his wedding there in the island, a simple wedding with your closed ones. He will ask you to live in an apartment later while he save more money to buy a bigger house for you. He cant shower you with romantic things, but with his love. He will squeeze your face and play with your cheeks, and laugh, he also loves to kiss you on the forehead. Everytime you tell your problems to him, he listen, he positioning himself in your place, he will let you cry infront of him but he will comfort you later on, he's such a warm person, with a big heart. He can be so attached to you that he have to distract his mind from thinking of you or else he will go crazy, he work hard for your future with him, he always comfort you and tell you to rest assured everything to him, he will take all the burdens, and you shouldnt be sad or worry. I can make sure that he will be a loving husband and a great father for you. 

He's sometimes can  be so silly, at his age he loves patrick star so much that he have some of the dolls. He loves to eat home food, so you would be better to great at cooking. He doesnt like crackers and hates inner part of animal's body or spicy food. He nvr forget to pray before he eats, and everytime you're full and cant finish your food, he will say to stop, you dont need to finish it, and sometimes he will help you too. He always tell how much he hates his big forehead and his hair is such a messy. He hates going to the saloon he doesnt like the smell of it. He doesnt care about his outfits, he only dress up whenever it's something important. He can annoy you with so much things, like he will always tell you how every girls likes him and wanted to be with him, how he would be so handsome if he dress up. He will cheer you up, he will encourage you with everything, even if you failed at what you do and you feel such a failure, he never missed any moment to help you to get up again.

He doesnt have so much things to give you for now, but he's looking for a companion that can stay with him through alot of his ups and downs, he wants someone who's not materialistic, someone who doesnt ask much, someone who can be with him when he have nothing. He's looking for someone who can help him crawling back to the top, a lifetime partner who wont hurt his heart and stab him at the back like i once did. He's really a great man who deserved so much good things, he deserved to have a great, loving and caring woman. Someone who is smart enough to talk about politics and business with him, you dont need to have a good family background, he doesnt care, you dont need to be pretty, you are already pretty if you got his heart. 

You know, ppl make mistakes, ppl changes everyday. You know, I used to be "you" in this long descriptions of him, and i dont want anyone to messed up like i did, i wanted to make sure he will get what he deserved, treat him right and be the right person for him, cause im wishing once again, to be "you"

Author's Note

I posted this story on behalf of my girlfriend, we had a lot of hard times together and in the end, we passed it. We don't know if we can make it in the end, but i can make sure she is "you" in this story

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

This is an intriquing story. It had a moral tone and great 'advice' to people with very insightful feelings.

The only advice I would give you is to 'tweak' this a little and correct the abbreviation of "ppl" and the "apostrophe" where needed. Example: doesn't not doesnt. Very important especially in contests where the standard is high and every little thing is taken into account.

Also, please read the contest rules carefully. This did not follow theme, so unfortunately it can't be considered. Sorry! However, thank you for this interesting piece of writing.

Helena