Lust

Lust

A Poem by Meliss@k
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We discover that our innocent pleasures sometimes take us over, becoming our guilty struggles instead.

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Lust.

Enough is Enough.
Lord,
Make me blind, in turn to see,
With the soul,
You bestowed to me.

Yet.
Because we ate 
From that appled tree, how precious can
Love truly be?

Love/Hate relationships.
Controversies.
Lust and Love.

My enemies.


© 2012 Meliss@k


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Awwwww-----Lust and hate and love. Don`t you think
some of that stuff is a help to us in the long run ?
I recognize the points you make and they are well taken.
You set your sights high, on a larger concept than many do.
For this you are to be commended.
You are an excellent writer... I was moved by you . You have
moved me to comment, so you have done well.
Thank you,
---- Eagle Cruagh


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meliss@k

11 Years Ago

Your reviews and your own writing are always so wonderful and brokliant. Thank you so much for this .. read more



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Lust...one of the most common human failings besides the love of money. Lust is indeed a powerful and deadly sin. One minute you go into the bathroom to do something important (scooping out a cat box), and before you know it you're apologizing to God because you didn't have the mental or spiritual fortitude to resist temptation. Sad and disgusting. It's no wonder I've come to loathe myself. I hope you don't have this problem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Short but sweet.
Although I think lust and love, together can be a beautiful thing too


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meliss@k

11 Years Ago

You have a very good point xXSlugXx. Thanks so much for the review!
This is so very meaningful...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meliss@k

11 Years Ago

Yes it is, thank you so much for this review!
Great write

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

You can fix the spelling here:'appled'
Meliss@k

11 Years Ago

Should I just say apple?
zainul

11 Years Ago

I think so.
I am ready to appreciate your choice of 'appled' if you have a special reason.
Awwwww-----Lust and hate and love. Don`t you think
some of that stuff is a help to us in the long run ?
I recognize the points you make and they are well taken.
You set your sights high, on a larger concept than many do.
For this you are to be commended.
You are an excellent writer... I was moved by you . You have
moved me to comment, so you have done well.
Thank you,
---- Eagle Cruagh


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meliss@k

11 Years Ago

Your reviews and your own writing are always so wonderful and brokliant. Thank you so much for this .. read more
This is telling so much in so little. There are so many love/hate relationships, but there is something unspoken here and that is great how you write how you feel into a poem but you don't have to go into depth.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Meliss@k

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Kimmy :)
This is certainly an interesting work. Short but stirs a pretty good battle with deep consequent. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Meliss@k

11 Years Ago

Well thank you Ed Fagan. :)
I wrote this poem at work after realizing that I can't keep hopin.. read more

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