Awwwww-----Lust and hate and love. Don`t you think
some of that stuff is a help to us in the long run ?
I recognize the points you make and they are well taken.
You set your sights high, on a larger concept than many do.
For this you are to be commended.
You are an excellent writer... I was moved by you . You have
moved me to comment, so you have done well.
Thank you,
---- Eagle Cruagh
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Your reviews and your own writing are always so wonderful and brokliant. Thank you so much for this .. read moreYour reviews and your own writing are always so wonderful and brokliant. Thank you so much for this review, you hit it right on the dot!
Lust...one of the most common human failings besides the love of money. Lust is indeed a powerful and deadly sin. One minute you go into the bathroom to do something important (scooping out a cat box), and before you know it you're apologizing to God because you didn't have the mental or spiritual fortitude to resist temptation. Sad and disgusting. It's no wonder I've come to loathe myself. I hope you don't have this problem.
Awwwww-----Lust and hate and love. Don`t you think
some of that stuff is a help to us in the long run ?
I recognize the points you make and they are well taken.
You set your sights high, on a larger concept than many do.
For this you are to be commended.
You are an excellent writer... I was moved by you . You have
moved me to comment, so you have done well.
Thank you,
---- Eagle Cruagh
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Your reviews and your own writing are always so wonderful and brokliant. Thank you so much for this .. read moreYour reviews and your own writing are always so wonderful and brokliant. Thank you so much for this review, you hit it right on the dot!
This is telling so much in so little. There are so many love/hate relationships, but there is something unspoken here and that is great how you write how you feel into a poem but you don't have to go into depth.
This is certainly an interesting work. Short but stirs a pretty good battle with deep consequent. Well done.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Well thank you Ed Fagan. :)
I wrote this poem at work after realizing that I can't keep hopin.. read moreWell thank you Ed Fagan. :)
I wrote this poem at work after realizing that I can't keep hoping that I run into my future husband every time I see a new guy.
I dream of publishing a book of my poems one day. Until then; i'll be riding horses, loving on my dogs, writing poems, painting antlers, and livin' life for Christ.
Consider this collection of my w.. more..