My Wife

Her beauty is amplified by her unrefined exterior

She lays, submerged in allure

This woman has tresses that gently border her expression,

Composing a visual so tempting

A toasted complexion fused with almond designed eyes, a petite nose, and lusciously plump lips

Her skin, maintains silky to caress throughout her full physique

From her significant breasts,

To her fleshy abdominal region she has been drenched in gorgeousness

Her restricted territory receives my adoration along with her limbs stretched atop our mattress

This Woman is my lover, my friend, and my everything

She is flawed in all the right places, with loveliness through and through

To craft the most stunning woman I have ever set eyes on

Author's Note

I would love feedback for this piece. I accept all forms- constructive criticism, etc.

Reviews

[Just Kim]

very nicely written and formatted

[melissaepike]

Thank you so much!

[Onesimbah]

I love the pentameter of the poem! I also love how descriptive it is.... I felt the emotion in it.

[melissaepike]

Thank you thank you!