Two Lovers Pause

It's 9:01

How time does fly

Let's hit pause,

tell this place goodbye

 

We'll run away

for a day or two

do anything we want

With our two man crew

 

Play in the rain

or lay in the sun

as long as I'm with

My number one

 

Our hearts will set ablaze

Freedom our only rule

Time, not a barrier

But a precious Jewel

 

We'll do whatever we want

and do what we please

Connect in any way

And do it at ease

 

The world in our hands

Everything at our pleasure

Our love, and fun

Will grow beyond measure

 

Although we dont want it to

our fun will have to end

But our memories will stay

And through time again,

We will decsend

 

 

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Reviews

[A.Lee]

This is really good. I like the concept and the poem has a very youthful, playful, romantic feel to it. Nicely done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Being young and full of hope is best days in a life. I like the feel and desire of the poem. Your words are beautiful and hopeful. I like the complete poem. A excellent ending. Thank you.
Coyote

[Sexy P3nguin]

I agree with Hunter. I love it. Taking something like a pause button and writing about it is very original. You did it so well. At times we all wish we could do this and I think every one can relate to the feeling of time flying buy. The message is a strong one. "Hold on to your memories while you have them"
-Dustin
XOXO
I LOVE YOU MELINDA!!

[Flames_of_Desire]

I love it! :D