If my ♥ could talk, she'd say..

A poem written for my best friend in the whole world. I love you danielle:)

Life is kind of like the ocean, You can see how it starts,

but not the way it ends.

So lets just take things as they come to us,

And be happy we're best friends.

 

 Let us learn from each other,

We can help each other grow.

And let us always be there for one another,

At times we are feeling low.

 

 May we always be able to put a smile on each others face,

And a twinkle in our eyes.

And let us never forget all the good times,

 Like watching shooting stars fall from the skies.

 

 The laughs just keep on coming,

 Nothing can ever take that away.

Cause they start from the inside,

And get deeper everyday.

 

 They make us stronger,

 As they bring us closer together.

They always make our days brighter,

No matter the weather.

 

 Just the sound of that laugh,

And the sight of that smile.

Makes every risky minute,

Worth the while.

 

 A moment where nothing else matters,

And a chance to be free.

All the rest fades away,

 And its just you and me.

 

 We can just walk together,

To that beautiful place.

Side by side,

 With that look upon our face.

 

 The look,

That says it all.

 The one that reaches out,

 And will never let us fall.

 

 I see the truth in your eyes,

They're so honest and true.

They tell me everything,

And there is nothing you can do.

 

You can't fool me,

Cause its not your story to tell.

Its straight from your heart,

And I know it so well.

 

Your heart is so honest,

Caring and pure.

The only thing that can never lie to you,

This I know for sure.

 

You know it always makes you wonder,

Day in and day out.

How two different hearts can understand,

What the other is about.

 

When your heart skips' I can feel it,

When its sad, mine is too.

And if it ever feels emtpy and alone,

Always know that I am here for you.

 

So best friends it is,

Now and forever.

That's the best feeling there is,

Nothing could be better.

No never.

Author's Note

hope you like it!

Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

I really like the starting lines of each stanza ...Good work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

[KL]

I think if you shortened it and worked on the syllable count to make it a little more flowing, this would really stand out. I only say that because it's a bit wandering, and six or seven stanzas too long (the rhyme scheme you're using can only really stay fresh for so long). You started off REALLY strong, though, with your ocean simile. If you took a step away from the cliche and made each line fairly consistent in syllable count, this would be amazing. Other than that, welcome to Writerscafe!