Love Lock

I couldn't find such guy
That would make me fall
Like the way he did.

Author's Note

Constructive criticism please :)
Thanks!

Reviews

[Chris]

What brings the frustration to your writing?

What language do you THINK in? I ask because - translating into another language AFTER you've written something seriously impacts the flow and tone - as well as the meaning - of the writing.

[Addict With a Pen]

I like the title of this! A lot said in just a few lines. Good job!

[eemceespee]

Thank you for the encouragement! :)