Celtic Goddess

What girl hasn't wanted a guy to say something similar to her.

Without you I would fall,

Down into this world ball,

dost thou ever desire to taste thy sweet lips,

willingly given at risk of blind hate,

for my love is not but a flower.

Budding with bright light and want,

Thy very breath holds spring perfume,

Thy eyes sin's light to feed blossoming joy,

Voice so soft the wind stills with envy.

Thy are Celtic Goddess,

Hidden in grove of peace,

and beauty.

Let us run together,

across sky and earth,

To merry lands

to fast in richness of life,

Let us fly through clouded sky

Thy shall swim in crystal pool

Where death knows none.

Reviews

[Scott Metro]

Beautifully ancient...
Very pretty.....

[Angi]

I just spent an afternoon reading early poetry. You wouldn't know I had stopped. Lovely. Angi~

[Saki Kikkio]

thank you that means a lot to me

[Angi]

This was my pleasure to read, Melanite.

[kublakhan27]

I think these sentiments can apply to both genders...they could be the words of a wooer or the words of someone whose been wooed...well done :)

[RachelReaper]

This was beautiful, and so sweet. Very nicely done, great write.

[Ron Newton]

Oh wow,This is one of the best Poems have read so far It's very easy to get lost in it even though it's short It make's the reader want to go back through just to capture the Image,Feeling and emotion from it again.Great Job Keep it Up :)

[Riley Bray]

I have no criticism for this piece, none! Very Shakespearean in style and wonderfully done at that, so let me just say you have quite the talent. Thank you for blessing this site with such wonderful poetry! (By the way, what girl HASN'T wanted her beau to say this?!?)

[Saki Kikkio]

Thank you so much that means a lot to me to see you type that

[Riley Bray]

Any time, write some more poetry!!

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Kind of 18th century for me, though it has good flow and delivers good imagery. Thank you my new friend.