So Now What?

This was written while my girlfriend was at work and it was my attempt at a comedy... I think it's a fail. ^_^

Okay, so now what?

I’m all alone

With no one to bug

My pleading and begging

Just doesn’t seem to help

I wanted to poke you some more

I wanted to tell you

That I love you 1000 more times

Just so you will tell me to shut up

I miss when you’re mean to me

I miss you calling me funny lookin’

I miss pointing out

That you got that line from Fargo

I want to hear you say my name

I want you to tell me you love me

I want you to tell me about your day

As I fake-ignore you

As I play my video games

I want you to scoff as I admit that

And as you read this

I want you to demand my attention

Even though you already have it

But you’re not here…

And I am all alone…

So now what do I do

As I sit here in my dinky old car

With nothing to do

Reviews

[IPMONER]

kinda like it.

[Political Punk ~~ CBD]

it is sorta funny, it is a really good poem. it is a well written piece and i have to say that it would make a great piece.

[QuietPoet]

Your never alone...

It is a cute poem. Seems you missed her enough to write a poem about it. =)