lady-killer

 

he notices me

my presence-my essence-my breathing

my statue stands aloud of the silent picture, but only when he's looking

I've noticed him

his soul-breathtaking

he sees my hands

a small art

his hands are bigger than mine but gentle

strongly inviting

he hears me speak

sad-love

his voice instills in my mind

repeating-repeating

 I am deafened in his eyes

 his lips move my silence

amplifying the pain in my chest

he smile's with his head down low

lost in his own world

smiling

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Doctor Deathstab]

Simply breathtaking description of feelings. You should definitely stalk that special person.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

I loved this write about pure infatuation and the dance of souls.

"he notices me
my presence-my essence-my breathing
my statue stands aloud of the silent picture, but only when he's looking "

absolutely brilliant first lines that snared my attention in an instant! Quite lovely...