I wrote this prose in the midst of the 198 aftershocks that shook my town and my country (Philippines), a few months ago. Sometimes, things come out creatively from tragic events.
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Though you didn't quite use descriptive imagery, I could still see many images gripping for my imagination, and part of that is probably how you utilized your language. You wield your words like a warning, creating a feel that is very biblical. Part of it is probably the deep emotion you conjured this from. Creative outpourings don't come from tragic events just sometimes; It's pretty much guaranteed. Your poem has a weight to it, but your words carry. Fantastic write.
This is Powerfully conveyed...so very sad about the devastation that overwhelmed the Philippines. Your work has expressed the despair in a unique and artistic way.
Cometh tears that burn
and spittle from putrid mouths"~Stunning work!...very strong imagery.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thanks Robbie. This piece summed up my troubled thoughts that day. And I was alone at home and every.. read moreThanks Robbie. This piece summed up my troubled thoughts that day. And I was alone at home and everything became unbearable and so I need to exhaust and I came up with this. I miss your enrapturing works so I'm dropping by there in a wee bit :)
12 Years Ago
That is so scary! I'm sure it can scar a person emotionally. Expressing your emotions can help relea.. read moreThat is so scary! I'm sure it can scar a person emotionally. Expressing your emotions can help release some of the pain. Thank you for sharing this.
I love the mix of creativity and morbidity. It also sheds light on how where very shallow on the surface. A shell we're just renting out for the time being until our spirits ascend to their rightful eternal place
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
And lest there shalt be tragedies (like 198 aftershocks) to shake our adamant consciousness before w.. read moreAnd lest there shalt be tragedies (like 198 aftershocks) to shake our adamant consciousness before we come to fathom the purpose of our mortality. Thank you for the lovely review :)
Though you didn't quite use descriptive imagery, I could still see many images gripping for my imagination, and part of that is probably how you utilized your language. You wield your words like a warning, creating a feel that is very biblical. Part of it is probably the deep emotion you conjured this from. Creative outpourings don't come from tragic events just sometimes; It's pretty much guaranteed. Your poem has a weight to it, but your words carry. Fantastic write.
I don't usually enjoy very short poems, but this was an exception. Very well done. It is amazing all the emotions and thoughts you were able to fit in just a few lines.