Breathe

Let us surrender

and inhale each other's breath

Don't mind the cognac

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

Wonderful. That last line was unexpected, humorous and made the haiku "real" to me.

[Mockingbird]

sounds like two people who have just met at a bar and are having a one night stand.

[Pax]

*smiles* great!! i would not mind either...lol

[Kim]

Really nice work :)