Our mediocre lives

This is about the mediocracy of our lived. How we make such a fuss about problems that we have no right complaining about, really. These days fade, and all that remains is ourselves.

day after day

our mediocre lives

excitement wears out

time settles like dust

your heart breaks and heals

each day,

unimportant.

mundane cycle

spins everything around

I became dizzy

and collapsed on the ground

both victory and defeat

that I was the first one out.

Reviews

[Jack "DO NOT USE" Young]

I love it. It was clever and all too true. A cycle of Work, Buy, Consume, Die.

[quinfinn]

hard day at work? well, anyway, i do like this one,whatever the venue... nice write

[.......]

I became dizzy
and collapsed on the ground
both victory and defeat
that I was the first one out

I loved this part, i found it kind of cute really.
Such an enjoyable read.