Returning

Returning

A Poem by MeithaSoekotjo

Running and flying were loving

When you see a butterfly teasing

Or there’s someone accompanying

In catching all the memory from rising

 

Wish, there’s a time for sharing

More than just a good time in laughing

A bad time fully with crying

Or all the feeling from fainting

 

Words are collapsing

From lovers who are falling

Enemies who are arguing

And gods who are annoying

 

It’s not an easy  understanding

Still it’s not impossible for wishing

All the good things to be happening

Wait and see of His returning!

© 2016 MeithaSoekotjo


Author's Note

MeithaSoekotjo
Matthew 24 New International Version (NIV)
https://www.biblegateway.com/passage/?search=Matthew+24&version=NIV

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Your poem seems to be alluding to something, all along, instead of just coming right out & saying what's going on. I don't do well trying to interpret such a poem with hidden meanings. I do like your use of the "ing" verbs, tho it contributes to an overall passive voice . . . a good selection used to describe living life in general, embracing ups & downs, plus you're consistent in forming lines with these "ing" verbs.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MeithaSoekotjo

8 Years Ago

Hi Barleygirl!
Thank you for your lovely review.
Yes, this poem is not a straight poi.. read more



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Your poem seems to be alluding to something, all along, instead of just coming right out & saying what's going on. I don't do well trying to interpret such a poem with hidden meanings. I do like your use of the "ing" verbs, tho it contributes to an overall passive voice . . . a good selection used to describe living life in general, embracing ups & downs, plus you're consistent in forming lines with these "ing" verbs.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MeithaSoekotjo

8 Years Ago

Hi Barleygirl!
Thank you for your lovely review.
Yes, this poem is not a straight poi.. read more
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You have made reference to the Bible in this poem. Not having a concrete knowledge of its content makes this poem difficult to understand and review.

It appears to be intimating about the return of the Saviour, and how His return will bring love and happiness upon the Earth. I am not a believer, but i understand the hopes and sentiments in this poem.

A nice poem, although it has been difficult for me to relate to and review.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MeithaSoekotjo

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your review!
I don't see you have any difficulty in understanding this poem, t.. read more

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Added on April 19, 2016
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Tags: Worlds, problems, blessing, miracle, Jesus.

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MeithaSoekotjo
MeithaSoekotjo

Denpasar, Bali, Indonesia



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I am a poetry from my parents and still continuing to be one without any plan in doing so. I live in Bali, Indonesia. I am an initiator of an art appreciation community, Free Your Mind. more..

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