come to me

whenever you are down

whenever you are terrified

don't just let it go

come to me

 

I'll help you find the light

when your heart is dark

hold your hand through it

please come to me

 

if I'm not good enough

tell me it's all too much

find somebody else

just be happy

Reviews

[Rahul]

IIns phrase's deep and lovely. wonderful write once again.100/100 :) you got a talent and you're reaching out indeed.

[Adri Moolman]

thank you so much again....

[Coyote Poetry]

The gift of safety and love is rarely given. Which is sad. I like the set-up. Kind requests leading to a sad ending. We learn from the mistakes o other people. Better to be a kind voice than a distance memory. Thank you for the excellent poem. You made me ponder many things.
Coyote

[Adri Moolman]

thanks

[smilempsn]

beautiful thoughts put together Adri :)

[Adri Moolman]

thanks

[Ency Bearis]

Awesome poem, nicely rendered thoughts.

[Adri Moolman]

thanks

[Astro]

You must have a gentle soul to pen such a caring and understanding set of lines that show support the way you have. Very nice.

[Adri Moolman]

thank you

[Half Dream]

Oh my, what a beautiful piece here ! We all need that kind of affection in our life. Such a heartfelt write. :)

Great job! :)

[Adri Moolman]

thank you

[Archangel Gabriel]

Gosh this piece has a sad desperation to it by the final stanza. It speaks of unrequited love as someone watches and wishes that another will come to them but doubts their own worth.

[Adri Moolman]

thank you

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice warm poem. Great work

[Adri Moolman]

thank you

[Stella Armour]

what a lovely poem with such kind thoughts..

[Adri Moolman]

thank you so very much

[Stella Armour]

you are very welcome

[quinfinn]

a wonderful invitation to someone for whom you care, penned lovingly and with great honesty,

[Adri Moolman]

thank you

[quinfinn]

no problem