goodbye

goodbye

A Poem by Adri Moolman
"

to my everything R.I.P Bakkies.... 28 July 2005- 26 May 2013

"

everyone tells me your in a better place

then why does it hurt so bad

emptiness fills me when I get home

your not here anymore

 

sometimes I forget

and I can't wait to see you

then I call your name and remember

your gone

 

you weren't a human

and everyone thinks I'm childish for crying

but you were more than my best friend

more than family

 

I wish everyday that I can have you back

even if it was just for one day

I love you

I miss you always

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Adri Moolman


Author's Note

Adri Moolman
I really miss him

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mourning for your dog is definitely not childish! sometimes I think I feel more for animals than I do for humans, which is probably messed up! But nice write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

11 Years Ago

thank you so much......no its not messed up dogs don't hurt as much as humans
There's a dog I had that I still miss. Great work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

11 Years Ago

thank you
Poetically well penned tribute, nice one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

11 Years Ago

thx
Okay, so that was beautiful and i think my heart just broke....... I'm sorry.
But yes, it is beautiful and so poetic. brilliant work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

11 Years Ago

thanks
I love my three dogs too. 100/100.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

11 Years Ago

thanks
RIP Bakkies .....
Well of course he is at a much better place...

this is a sweet and sad dedication ...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

11 Years Ago

thanks
No one loves you like your dog. Sweet dedication

Posted 11 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

11 Years Ago

thanks

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Adri Moolman
Adri Moolman

pretoria, South Africa



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I have been offline for a long time now... I didn't feel anything worth writing and to me writing is nothing when it is not emotions put into something special. I am 17 from South Africa... My passi.. more..

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