not that easy to get rid of

Maybe your here

Maybe your just a voice that I hear

coming from the darkness

back to me

I know this is not easy for you

but you know you would find me

right here

always

I thought I lost you the day you changed your ways

and I know you would never be the same again

but you know I'll never give up on you

life might get hard somedays

I'm here please talk about it

don't push me away

I know I'm not always perfect

everyone has mistakes

I will still support you

even if you don't care anymore

I'm not that easy to get rid of

Author's Note

I just discovered this in a book I used to write little bits and pieces in when I was 13-14

Reviews

[smilempsn]

It's ' not easy to get rid of' your such wonderful and meaningful poems..
It's all about HOLDING back a Thing... Even though the other person has Moved on..!!

[Peter H]

ah , the fortitude of a person who doesn't give up on the person she loves no matter how much that persons feeling is not reciprocal to them . i like this piece the writer's resolute is admirably notable and gallant . simple but inspiring good write keep sharing

[Adri Moolman]

thanks

[Ency Bearis]

Maybe you're here
Maybe you're just a voice that I hear
- nice rhyme and I think that's what you intend for - please take note of the verb...

Otherwise this is a nice advise to a friend with sympathy.

[Adri Moolman]

thanks

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I quite liked it...the idea of someone being somewhere or perhaps it is just the mind playing tricks on us. It is amazing some of the things that we come up with when we are young poets.

I'm sure you left it as it is on purpose, but in the first two lines "your" to "you're"

[Adri Moolman]

thanks

[Baby Ricochet]

you never loss good friends

[Adri Moolman]

nope

[quinfinn]

awesome write, really deep. i love this one!

[Adri Moolman]

thanks so much

[quinfinn]

very welcome