love you like a brother

love you like a brother

A Poem by Adri Moolman
"

for my best friend

"

Nobody would understand our random chats

No one would understand the friend you are

 

Not my lover just my friend

not completely my friend

More my brother

 

Thanks for keeping my head above water

keeping me from going mad

 

I love you like a brother

thanks for never letting go

 

You are not always perfect

you're a self centered jerk

 

I'm not the best either

I'm a over sensitive idiot

 

love you anyways

thanks for never letting go

© 2013 Adri Moolman


Author's Note

Adri Moolman
not the best... to all the people out there having a friend like this

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This is a rare gift...a friend who knows you better than you know yourself. Relationships, whatever they may be, can be tedious at times, and sometimes we have to step back and take stock of the things that really matter. A few little stumbling points in the phrasing...second stanza is a little difficult on the ears and the last stanza may be a little more powerful if the wording was different. Overall, though, I enjoyed the sentiment of this one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

11 Years Ago

thank u
thanks to show the relation.........

Posted 11 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

11 Years Ago

not for u
NITHIN PURPLE

11 Years Ago

lol..i dn't care..........
very nice

Posted 11 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

11 Years Ago

thanks
I have a female friend like that. God I love her to death.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Adri Moolman

11 Years Ago

he's very special to me
I can relate to this piece.. :)
A friend can turn out to be many things.. A amazing lover... A wonderful husband.. and A caring Brother too :) :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adri Moolman

11 Years Ago

thanks a lot
smilempsn

11 Years Ago

your most welcome :)

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Adri Moolman
Adri Moolman

pretoria, South Africa



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I have been offline for a long time now... I didn't feel anything worth writing and to me writing is nothing when it is not emotions put into something special. I am 17 from South Africa... My passi.. more..

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