starry night

Have you ever looked up at the starry night

and wondered why the moon shines so bright

Have you ever seen the light

or do you only feel the fright

 

Is the night your happy place

Or do the darkness make you pace

will I see a smile on your face

or is that just not the case

 

Isn't this time so great

or is it just to late

do you feel like your about to break

or is that just you being fake

 

 

Author's Note

was bored so I wrote :)

Reviews

[whitefang311]

I am sorry It was not as good as the first one but I felt the theme was good over all It was a good Theme also do you fear the night or embrace the night good subject good poem.

[Azriel]

lovely piece, poems that use natural images or references, such as the moon and the night sky in this case, turn out to be some of my favorites...also love the message of this poem as well.

[Adri Moolman]

Thanks a lot***