I'm just a girl

I'm just a girl

A Poem by Adri Moolman
"

life isnt always a fairytale

"

Through the window I watch as a new day breaks

As the sun begins to shine

 

and right there the sad feeling awakes

to know that you're not mine

 

I'm not perfect I'm just a girl

Dreaming of my fairytale world

 

One day I'll be a girl

within my extraordanary world

 

You will love me the way I am

not wanting me to change who I am

 

 

and later I'll watch the sun go down

knowing its better now

© 2013 Adri Moolman


Author's Note

Adri Moolman
its really not that good but anyway tell me what you think

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It's not bad but I would have the cycle of the sun mirror the changing on the girl into a woman. The sun won't change and no one would expect it to. A sort of way to draw comparisons. Just my two cents.


Posted 11 Years Ago



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Adri Moolman
Adri Moolman

pretoria, South Africa



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I have been offline for a long time now... I didn't feel anything worth writing and to me writing is nothing when it is not emotions put into something special. I am 17 from South Africa... My passi.. more..

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