Chapter 3

"But why does he let this happen? Why did he almost let me die?" he looks at me with the biggest brown eyes. "He doesn't exist. There is no god," his eyes are cold now. 

"But he didn't let you die, D.J. He saved you," I tell him. I pour some more pink sand onto my sticky paper. 

"No. My grandma saved me. God isn't here Kelly, can't you see?" he closes his eyes and squeezes his eyes and squeezes them shut really tightly. He's trying not to cry.

"D.J., listen..." 

"No! F**k you! I've had enough of your bullshit!" he shouts.

"Shut up, D.J.," I hiss.

"Why?" his eyes narrow, and he stares at me, a tear escaping from his eye. 

"They're going to call code, D.J." He shuts up, but it's too late. Joe's at the door.

"What's going on?" D.J. balls up his sand art and throws it across the room. 

Reviews

[Calypso]

Lovely

[Faith]

Going to the next chapter to find out more. An intro to more of character but don't understand fully yet.

[simonmabee]

so confused right now. also the chapters are amazingly short. i feel like the brief episodes here could be explored a little bit further.

[Kaya]

Changing the point of view really confused me for a minute, but I'm really enjoying this. Please keep writing.

[MusicLover]

MORE MORE MORE

[Lunny]

you really know how to keep someone interested! :)

[Craig2591]

I'm not an English teacher, but I think "shut really tightly" should be "shut really tight".

You changed the story teller, which confused me a bit. I don't think I've ever seen that in a story before.

It's an easy read and interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter.

[Mrs.Blesh15]

wow this makes me want to cry. its so sad.