Love created by the sea

I swin as far as i can into the sea, escaping all the nose and business that floats around all day. I see the fish and jell fish that are swing and floating around minding nothing but them selfs. I smile at that. I feel myself get pulled under, all air escaping from my lungs. I thruash around my eyes burning, nothing is clear and the thing that pulls me under comes to my leave. It's not a fish or shark but a person of some sort. I can't breath and I feel light headed, he cradle my face as I am loosing the air that seems to slip by me so fast. My eyes close and i fall asleep. But i don't feel dead, i can feel the water glide past me...no dreaming, this is real, not fake, but alive.  What is happening?  

                I'm breathing, my eyes open slowly as I find myself laying on a bed. Maybe I was dreaming. No there he is the man, the creature that pulled me under, he swims to me, fish tall but a human upper body, handsome, beautiful. I can't help it so i swim over to him, and take his hands, i don't love him, i don't even know him, but this strange feeling is tingling on my skin as we touch. He plays with my hair, twining it between his fingures. I loved that. Wait I have a boyfriend, a real human one. I tell him as he looks at me confused. I tell him again but he doesn't understand me. How is it that i'm breathing right know, and i can see clear as day? I notice that this is a dream. I can feel hands on me, as they pull me out of the water. I'm not glade i was waken, but i'm not happy i fell asleep in the sea eaither. My eyes open as i throw up. And i look down at the water and the fish boy stars at me, frowning, blowing me a kiss. I throw up one more time. It's not rea...l.....

Reviews

[Angelove]

Yes I'm sorry and I am going to fix it but i have an smart phone touch and it won't let me do it from here and i don't have a computer so I have to use my iPad at school to fix it.

[ghost writer]

Your flash fiction is enchanting..but your grammar (which I normally overlook) is actually making it difficult to read..I would have a little proof read, then it will be perfect :)