Life isn't fair

Truth about what life is like.

Life is not to take evil to others

But it is to share and give

Life is about selfishness and not being selfish

Some people are giving and beauftiful

Some people are mean and ugly

Some can be nice and not beautiful but you look beside the point

Some are mean and very beautiful

But some are shy and coy 

And some are abused and hated

Some do drugs and smoke

Some drink and sell theme selves

But all are good in there own way 

We all need to be worked on even if we are nice

But sometimes we are to nice and need to be stern

But we are all loved and in the hands of god 

And sometime evil and cruel things happen to total and complet innocent people

And then you wounder why god has let you down

But you have to play the cards you have

Get through all the bad

And later on better things will happen 

God loves us 

And sometimes it takes some inner self surcharge to find his heart. 

And we all go through something and that's what makes us, us! 

I went through abuse and other things 

But know I am happy because I have a loving boyfriend, family, and friends

No more need to be sad.

Reviews

[red93]

Amen to this Angelove. Nice work and well put together ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Darkening Shadow]

This really sums up some of the evil that most people deal with on a daily basis

[axel]

wow,this is a poem with a message for all,good poem keep it up

[Keith]

I felt a shift between anger, love, sadness and hope. That is the sign of great writing. To make your readers feel. Well done, Angelove

Items I noticed:
Some drink and sell theme selves (themselves)
And sometime(s) evil and cruel things happen to total and complet (completely) innocent people (Maybe do something with the word total. It is redundant.)
I hope this helps.

All in all, I truly enjoyed reading this.

[just is]

I loved the last stanza in this write,
This is such a truthful write,
nicely said and done

[emman]

This is LIFE :)

[rosemary keogh]

Love this. You expressed this very well for me.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

very positive and beautifully expressed...liked it.