Running, Screaming

 ~Running, Screaming 

You walking on this road to nothing

People bunched together pushing, shoving 

Carnaval lights fill the open making you dizzy

The smell of corn dogs and cotton candy making you sick  

You walk faster and faster till you realize your running

Pushing people out of your way.

Kids screaming and running around with water guns

You can't take it anymore.

You run to the edge where the water is. 

You stand there saying your last wish's

Someone come's up behinds you, scares you

You jump with out meaning to and know you want to take it back 

The person jumps in after you and red and blue light shin in your eyes

Next thing you know your out cold 

You wake up and the ground

people crowding you. 

You see bright light's above your eyes.

Your starting to float up   

Arm's wrap around you and you know you didn't make it

It's time that god has taken you

you cry in the angle's arms

~Running, Screaming

Reviews

[Monica]

Well done. Interesting read, I really enjoyed it. The ending was beautiful...sad.

[Angelove]

Thank you, I usually don't write pomes I usually write books.

[J.J. Felton]

Very Cool. Slight grammar and spelling, but it didn't deter really from the meaning. I was curious from the beginning. Very good!

[pinpen]

I loved this, so nicely written.