Gone forever

This is about an Ex-boyfriend who had hurt me so badly that i had the need to write this

 The dark and agonizing pain that travels through me...

is ruffle humiliating.

I want to die

I want to stop suffering.

Grief and guilt winds inside me,

Never to leave.

I justice to be

Served to him!

Send hin away

For years at a time

I want him to hurt.

Hurt the way I do.

Every time I open

My slumbering eyes

In the morning...

I want to Die

I want to stop suffering...

Reviews

[Tomorrowneverknows]

Sometimes I feel the same . I love in particular this lines:

"Every time I open

My slumbering eyes

In the morning...


I want to Die

I want to stop suffering..."

It is a really beautiful poem

Jesus

[Morrissey]

Chilling and beautiful. Thanks for sharing :)

-if you wouldn't mind, maybe you could try reading some of my poetry. I feel like you'd enjoy it.

[Morrissey]

Chilling and beautiful. Thanks for sharing :)

-if you wouldn't mind, maybe you could try reading some of my poetry. I feel like you'd enjoy it.

[Morrissey]

Chilling and beautiful. Thanks for sharing :)

-if you wouldn't mind, maybe you could try reading some of my poetry. I feel like you'd enjoy it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Such a painful poem, but given the nature of the topic that is how it should be… any guy who hits a woman is no man. Just an insecure boy. I don't blame you for wanting him to hurt and suffer after what he put you through,

[Antoñyo]

The good thing about EXs, especially in the early years, in ten years you barely remember their name and laugh at why you were with them in the first place...but at the time of the pain, this piece accurately describes how many feel.

Thanks for the share

[Mike Cole]

This was a really good poem and I feel like you went very deep and you were able to show a little bit of vulnerability with your writing!

[DogDrawler]

Like a supernova, your poem outshines all. ;)

[Loki]

I hope this feeling has left you..
Or is working its way out..
I am no preacher..
I am no pretender..
I have felt that way..
I will tell you something that helped me..

I don't know you miss..
But I love you..
And no one is worth losing yourself to..
Where would all of the world be..
Without beautiful poets like you?

[Dr. Wood ?]

Most of us have had that pain at some time in our lives, you describe it quite uniquely here...You may want to alter Send HIN away...to HIM away...but that's just me being picky..Great poem