Sorrow

~the change of the wind has an effect on me~ 

My tears change direction...

Instead of rolling down, they go sideways

~My sorrow~

My sweet sweet sorrow.

I sit in self putty because I don't know what to do

Thoughts of sad thing cross my mind

~I feel no emotion~ 

I can't help it!

So don't get mad

Don't say that I've never loved you

Cause I have, I do, and always will!

~It's just that my emotions~

Have disappeared 

Some where in my mind,

I try to feel

I fake happy

But I cry

~And I'm sorry~

So sorry

Very sorry

~But I feel, beraly anything~ 

Forgive me...

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

This piece of poetry has expressive imagery and subtle emotion. A true pleasure to read!

[LL]

Good job of letting your feelings become an expression. Its in the times of sorrow that we sometimes write our best.

[Saumya]

this was reallllly great:)
very well done:)
keep writing,
saumya

[RedheadInTheShadows]

amazing. the emotions just flow right to the reader, giving a glimpse of how you felt

[Larrycall]

Its hauntingly beautiful ..its amazing good write

[ScottWinchester]

Lovely poem. Haunting, in its way.

Nice picture choice also lol.

- SW

[pandorascollar]

This poem is amazing! In fact I think it's one of my new favorites.

[MoriartyMesa]

Not to make a joke of great work, but this was me the last time I thought I had a chance at a blackjack table with nine vodka sodas in me, and damn it you captured it.

[WideEyedAbyss]

never say your sorry... it is a sign of weakness