Sadness

~Like if all the wight has lifted of my shoulders~

Like if you had fled out of my life

Like if i cut my wrist in front of you

Like if you sucked out my soul

Like if you cut out my heart

It feels to impossible

~I'm the pray and your the predator~ 

Maybe if i hadn't met you!

Maybe if I hadn't loved you

Things would be different 

But they aren't

~I think about you night and day~

Day and Night

Dawn to Dusk

And I still love you

I bleed for you

Always and forever

~Until the day I die~ 

I shall morne for you

Never to whip the tears from my eyes

My blue cold and broken eyes

~You shall get yours in the end~

But I love you forever and always

~I love you!~

Author's Note

This isn't about me its a random thought, a random blissful thought

Reviews

[LOfCharlemagne]

Very beautiful! I love it, very thoughtful and intriguing. Congratulations, its a beautiful poem :)

[Keith]

This is a haunting lament. It laid upon my spirit like a leaden weight. That is pretty powerful when you can do that to a reader. Nice :)

I found just a couple things:
Like if all the wight (weight) has lifted of my shoulders
I shall morne (mourn) for you

Thank you for sharing this.

[Owlgirl]

Wow, emotional and beautiful, this is amazing. I love the formatting. My only editing would be that in the first line of the second stanza 'pray' should be 'prey' and the 'i' in the next line should be capitolized. Great job! This is amazing.

[Irvette Dauphine]

this poem is full of emotional..
i like it :)

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Wow. This poem is so amazing and emotional. I really enjoyed the flow of words.
100/100