I'll wait

poem written for a contest. wish me luck!

i'll wait

i'll wait aslong as it takes

to hear your sweet voice again

to feel your hands warm in mine

to feel our fingers intertwine

to stand togethor lost in time

as long as i can

forever

i'll wait for your sweet lips

pursed when you're angry

at ease when you're not

i'l stare at them when not mid-kiss

and crave more during

always

i'll wait for you to run your fingers through my hair

and stroke me lovingly if you dare

our troubles will simply dissapear

if you will only stay right here

beside me

day and night

forever

always

*I'll wait*

Author's Note

i want everyone to look this over and tell me what you think.
it's for my first Writer;s Cafe contest:)

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

this was sweet, but carries a note of sadness at the same time. The bottom two words pop out, very nice.

[Megara]

Thank you:)

[Rekain]

Wow, this is really nice. Very moving and the thought of having someone wait for me like that makes me smile. Well done and I hope you win.

[Megara]

thanks:)

[DogDrawler]

Bravo Megara! Such great talent!
Very pawsome.

[Megara]

thank you so much:)

[Darkening Shadow]

This is a great poem! Good luck in the contest. =]

[Megara]

Thanks:)

[Darkening Shadow]

Anytime =]