I'll wait

poem written for a contest. wish me luck!

i'll wait

i'll wait aslong as it takes

to hear your sweet voice again

to feel your hands warm in mine

to feel our fingers intertwine

to stand togethor lost in time

as long as i can

forever

i'll wait for your sweet lips

pursed when you're angry

at ease when you're not

i'l stare at them when not mid-kiss

and crave more during

always

i'll wait for you to run your fingers through my hair

and stroke me lovingly if you dare

our troubles will simply dissapear

if you will only stay right here

beside me

day and night

forever

always

*I'll wait*

Author's Note

i want everyone to look this over and tell me what you think.
it's for my first Writer;s Cafe contest:)

Reviews

[Sarah Marie]

This is so beautifully written! I love the descriptive lines and sweet, subtle rhymes. Wonderful write!

[Megara]

Thank you very much ma'am^^

[beautiful dreamer]

wow meggie this is amazing!!!

[Megara]

Thaaannnnkkkkiiieeeessss^_^

[Emrick]

Nice title and message.
Lovely poem.

[Megara]

Thank you:)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You definitely put a convincing gesture with this verse... the tone and flow works well within the lines... If this is a contest poem... look over the entire again and correct the grammar/spelling... word usage... and the unnecessary words that can be taken out... make them not even second guess... your verse... but embellish it...

[Megara]

Thank you:)

[Larrycall]

This is amazing I can feel what you feel while reading this . It is beauitful

[Megara]

Thank you do much:)

[S. Waldo]

beautiful, it made me remember what my husband and I were like when we were dating :) you're a very talented young woman!

[Megara]

Thank you:)

[Dark Rider]

I love it! What else can I say. You're an amazing poet. I love the way you capture the emotion and the way you express it. I wish I could wrte like that. Great job! :)

[Megara]

you are a wonderfull writer,don't ever doubt yourself! and thank you for the review:)

[Dark Rider]

You're welcome.

[Ency Bearis]

great write and emotionally well expressed

[Megara]

thanks:)

[CreativeStroke]

This was beautiful and so many people are able to relate to it. Well done!

[Megara]

Thank you:)