Migrane

Your like a migrane in my head,

I wish you would just die down,

wish you would just evaporate,

instead of remaining you just thud against my skull,

still remaining in my brain.

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

I think the metaphor would be stronger if you used phrases like "die down" and "disappear" instead of "blow away" and "evaporate". Other than that, the poem is good. Good job :)

[meganelizabeth23]

ok thanks!:)